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Tuesday, 18 February 2014

Walking Over Alice's Grave - Chapter 1

This is a fanfic I wrote about five years ago, exploring what could have happened if Yuri had died and Alice had lived in the first Shadow Hearts game.  The original is here; this is a rewrite.




I Can't Keep That Promise
Yuri Volte Hyuga, Shadow Hearts: Covenant

My dear, sweet Yuri is dead. He is dead. He is gone. I hope that by repeating this, the pain will be numbed, but no…it still hurts.  Yuri is gone. Just like my father, and my mother before him.

We were on a train, travelling to Zurich, my mother's hometown. I still had family there, and with no other pressing engagements, Zurich was the only place we had any reason to visit.  Yuri had no family, but if he did, I would have gone with him.  I would have followed him to the ends of the earth.  It is only fear of disappointing him that keeps me from following him into death.  He fought so hard for my life.

We had fallen asleep on the train; when I awoke, Yuri did not. I shook him, and I even slapped him, but he would not stir. I picked him up - he is so much lighter now, in death - and carried him off the train. I carried him as far as I could, then I placed him gently on the ground. I checked again that he was truly dead, and, oh god, he was, he was. I dug a hole with my bare hands, tears flowing down my face. 

It was only a few days ago that I kissed him for the first time, after our victory in Neameto.  I shake the memory from my head as I loosen my blue ribbon, but removing that ribbon brings back another memory, of the only time Yuri has ever seen me with my hair loose.  I grit my teeth, and tie the ribbon around his wrist.

Then I take the crucifix from my throat.  It belonged to Yuri’s mother, Anne.  She gave it to his father, who gave it to Quihua, a little girl he met. When we were in Shanghai, Quihua’s father gave it to Yuri.  Yuri gave it me. We had not known each other long at the time, but he was so caring.  He told me to wear it in battle. He said it always had a calming effect, and as I was not used to battles it might help me.  It did. Whenever I felt myself start to panic, to go berserk, I looked at the cross and more often than not, I would snap out of it and find another reserve of strength
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I was undecided as to whether Yuri would want the cross or would prefer that I kept it. He loved me, I knew he did. This is not pure vanity. Last night, when he thought I was asleep, he whispered it to me. I very nearly was asleep, so I didn’t reply, only smiled a little. More than anything now, I wish I had answered him. I love him. I hope he knew that. I wish I'd told him. No, if I am to wish, I wish I could tell him right now, and he could answer. But the dead cannot answer.

That thought gives me pause.  I am an exorcist.

I had forgotten that, in the horror of this moment. I cannot call unwilling souls, souls that have passed over. Only those souls with regrets, those that are still here on this plane. Does Yuri have regrets? I wonder…

After defeating the godlet, Yuri, the others and I all hid the émigré away, and then stayed in Rouen for a while, while we planned for the future. It was…four or five days, I believe. Meiyuan brought Koudelka from London, and she and Halley stayed overnight in Rouen before heading to Le Havre to catch a boat to America. Koudelka and I shared a room. Margarite had a room to herself, as did Yuri. Margarite said she needed her privacy. Yuri refused to share with either Halley or Zhuzhen, on the grounds that one was an adolescent with too much energy and the other was a grumpy old man. I do not believe he was serious, but Yuri got his own room anyway. Margarite jokingly suggested that she share with him, at which point he hugged me and said that I was his woman. I blushed, but I do like it when he refers to me that way. It makes – made – me feel protected. The suffragettes would not agree with me, but I do not care. It is not – was not – a case of Yuri seeking to control me, he merely wanted to protect me.

I cannot believe he is gone.

Halley and Zhuzhen shared a room. Meiyuan wanted to share too, but Halley and Zhuzhen were very…definite…about that. I think Zhuzhen's words were "Over my dead body". Keith had already turned into a silver bat and flown back to his castle in Bistritz.

That night Koudelka told me about everything that had happened when she had first visited the Neameton Monastery, over a decade ago.  James O’Flaherty, a friend of my father’s had run into her there.  I had vague childhood memories of him as a serious man, one who disapproved of my mother.  I, in turn, disapproved of him.  Who was he not to like my mother?

Koudelka had run into Edward Branckett when she first entered Neameton.  He was Hally’s father.  Koudelka and Edward were close in age – nineteen and twenty, respectively.  Neither took to James O’Flaherty much, particularly as he was much older, in his forties, and prone to disagreeing with people. 

Patrick, the owner of Neameton, had been using the émigré manuscript in an attempt to revive his wife, Elaine.  Coincidentally, Elaine had also been James’ love, once, though Patrick had won her.  After her death, Patrick had gone mad with grief.  He committed numerous murders, in his attempts to make the spells in the émigré work as promised.  I heard of some of those murders, the ones where he hadn't been able to take the body away from the crime scene. The police never solved the case. Still, though it was evil, it was done out of love. I do not believe that the end justifies the means, but I believe the dead should rest in peace. Patrick has paid enough. I shall not be the one to give him away.

Koudelka and the others had found poor dead Patrick, rotting and run through with vines.  His wife had become an unholy horror; her body had revived, but her soul had not returned to it.  They realized that this creature had been the one to kill Patrick.  James’ sacrificed himself to save Koudelka and Edward.

That was the night Koudelka and Edward had become lovers. I asked her why. Did she love him?

She said that she didn’t know.  She was young, younger than I am now, and had honestly believed she was going to die.  I wonder if those are the things that brought Yuri and I together.

She also told me that Edward had made her feel normal.  I was fortunate in that my father was able to hide my powers, and I had not suffered.  Koudelka had been turned out by her family, hated and feared as a witch.  Feeling normal was unusual for her.

I see a little of Yuri in her words.  His mother was torn apart by their possessed neighbours right in front of him, and his father was killed when he tried to fuse with the Seraphic Radience.  Without them, he had been forced to fend for himself.  After watching his mother’s death at the hands of men he had known and trusted, it had taken him a long time to be able to trust anyone.

When I expressed these thoughts, Koudelka told me that that was why she’d sent Yuri to me.  She’d sensed the turmoil in his mind, as well as his strength.  She’d also felt drawn to me, due to the similarity of our powers.  She’d hoped we’d be able to help each other.

I blushed, and attempted to change the subject.  I asked why she was looking for Edward now.  Simply because he was Halley’s father?  Or was there something more to it?

Inside, I contemplated all the ways it could go wrong.  What if Edward had another family?  What if he pretended not to know her?

Koudelka picked up on my thoughts.  She has a most disconcerting habit of doing that.  She told me exactly what would happen to anyone who hurt her son, and I feared for Eddward Branckett if he wasn’t a good man.

She did not complete the sentence, but I wondered what it would be like to care for someone that much. I care for Yuri, of course, though in a different way than I would a child. He is older than me, by four years, though he does act like a child at times. I would not have him any other way.

The next day, Koudelka and Halley left, Zhuzhen going with them.  He was headed to Shanghai, and Le Havre was a good place to start from.

Koudelka looked at me, then Yuri with a strange expression on her face, before hugging us both and saying goodbye.  I wonder if she knew then what was going to happen?  I hate that she didn’t warn me, didn’t try to stop it, even though, logically, I know she couldn’t have done anything.

Margarite stayed in Rouen with us for a while. She asked me how I was feeling, whether I felt ill in any way whatsoever. I wondered why she was so concerned; as far as I could see, there was no cause for it.  She left Rouen the day before Yuri and I did.  She gave me one of her pistols when we said goodbye, told me to use it for my own protection.  I thanked her, but I did not think I would have need of it.

That was yesterday.  Last night, Yuri and I shared a room, and a bed.  Last night, Yuri told me he loved me.  Last night, Yuri was alive.

I am thinking about these stupid, irrelevant things to keep myself from crying, but it isn’t working!  Oh, Yuri, Yuri, how could you leave me again?! In those months after you disappeared in Shanghai I had hope.  I hadn’t seen you dead, so there was hope that you were out there somewhere.  But now, your corpse is in front of me, growing colder. 

I cling to him, crying, sobbing.  “Please don’t leave me!  Please, Yuri!”

He can’t be dead.  How can he be dead?  He was alive, only a few hours ago.  I fell asleep in his loving arms, and woke up wrapped in a corpse.  I pray that I am dreaming.  I pray that the universe is mistaken, and that, soon, it will fix itself, and everything will be all right, and I’ll tell Yuri I thought he was dead, and he’ll laugh…

I howl at the sky, like an animal.  There is no other response.  My lover lies dead in my arms.

He had given me his father's coat on the train, told me to keep it forever.  He couldn't have known he was leaving me when he said that.  He couldn't.

I think that I should give it the coat back; he might be cold. But, he told me to keep it. He wrapped it around me and told me to keep it.

I lay him gently in the grave, placing his hands over his chest.  My ribbon curls around his wrist.

His pendant is still around his neck. The gem is a dull red colour, like dried blood.  Feeling guilty, I gently unclasp it and place it around my own neck.  I already have his coat, I know.  But I need more.  I need to keep more of him.  Dear god, I would keep all of him if I could.

His eyes are closed. I felt a morbid desire to open them, to see his eyes in death, to find another way to prove it to myself.  I keep trying to prove myself wrong.

His eyes were flat and grey, with nothing of their usual warmth.  I closed his eyelids and kissed him.  Then I turned away and began covering him over.  I didn’t let myself think, else I couldn’t have done it at all.

When I had finished I stood over the – the grave, oh god, it’s Yuri’s grave - and I opened the small bible my father had left me. I said a short prayer. The wind had begun to blow now and my hair blew in front of my eyes, obscuring my view. The wind tore my words from me the instant I said them, snatching them away.

Eventually, pushing my hair back with one hand, holding Yuri's necklace with the other, I screamed at the sky "I commend his soul to any God worthy of it!"

I was left panting.  I screamed again, no words, just raw emotion spilling out of my mouth. I ended up kneeling in front of Yuri's grave crying as though my heart would break. I had no hope now. Suddenly, I heard a voice from behind me.

"What's all the screaming for, girl?" It was a man, speaking French. I turned and saw…no.  Even after all these years, he was unmistakable.  I was astonished by the coincidence, even though I’d come here trying to find him.

"Uncle Geppeto?"

He peered at me through the gloom, adjusting his glasses. "Uncle - Alice? Is that you?"

I nodded. "Yes," I sniffed a little, and wiped the tears from my face. It was raining now, so the gesture was more for effect than anything else.

He hobbled toward me. "Whatever's happened?"

I sniffed again, trying to hold back the tears. "Yuri. It's Yuri. He's gone,"

He put his arm around me. "Come home with me. I haven't seen you in years. Now, tell me, who's Yuri? Someone special to you?"

I nodded and started crying again as he took me back to his home.



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